Your website is enthusiastic: it’s logo at the top is almost iconic and I’m very please with the way both of you have handled this. Overall, I think the site is likely to be a low A, so should get about 50 marks out of 60.
Mrs Ward’s comments must be followed through. You need an extra two marks at the very least for the planning grade.
There is excellent understanding of the forms and conventions used in the productions and of the role and use of new media in various stages of the production. There is proficient understanding of the combination of main product and ancillary texts.
There is excellent skill in choice of form in which to present the evaluation. There is proficient ability to communicate excellent use of digital technology or ICT in the presentation.
Audience feedback will be done as a final blog.
I’d like you to check the websites (both of them) for spellings and any other typo’s, punctuation and other mistakes - I’ve found a few and corrected them on the copy I have.